Originally Posted by kalliea

Write it as you sound. One long comma-less sentence. Then go back and break everything up in to short, concise, comma-less sentences/paragraphs. The feeling of you will still be there, but it will be professional and easy to read. Then make sure your ending and beginning are connected, and everything flows easily, and you're done.

And umm...I wouldn't include the slang. Just my opinion.