Conversation Between miss_doitsu and unclemeat2u

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  1. Hi there, I've completed a first draft SOP that 7 friends helped me edit. I was happy with it because it read like an essay, was compact, and I felt it showed my passion and qualities well. Then a friend read it, read online a little bit about writing SOPs and said it didn't seem like me and seemed to stilted. I have two questions for you: should it read like an essay? could you read it for me to give me a sense of if I am on the right track or if I should re-write it?
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